いまのラノベならゲーセンで出会う程度のインパクトじゃほとんど手に取ってもらえなそう
大学生主人公っていうのもウケが悪いし、主人公は巻き込まれ体質の高校生に変更
出会いは夜の潰れて閉鎖されたアミューズメントパークとかにして
ヒロインももう少し増やして、メインが不治の病持ちで実は世界の敵と戦っている
サブヒロインの一人がツンデレ幼なじみ、もう一人が無口の貧乳娘(実は人間ではない)で
金髪ロングのミステリアスな先輩とクラスメイトの双子も主人公にせまってきて
オチはいくつもの戦いの末に主人公とヒロインで天地を再創造して二人の魂は新たなる世代へと転生、トルキキョウが一面に咲いた別次元の地球で少年少女が永遠の愛を誓い合うって感じでどうですか
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オチを超常現象的にするのって最近のラノベじゃないよね。90年代的。
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